How is my story so far? Please answer!?

Your story is very well written! I do think that you should continue writing the story. I love how you describe certain aspects of it. Although it was lengthy i enjoyed reading it very much. Your style or writing is very descriptive and you almost feel like you are there. As i got deeper into the story it felt as if i was reading a published book. In addition it seem like a true story and the way you describe things makes someone not want to stop reading it. Good Luck in your writing and i hope i help!